I rerally like this song, you have a strong sound and well composed. I would just maybe add another synth to dance around the keys a bit, at least in the 2nd portion of the song. you could use that synth between the 2:11 and 2:22 mark with an LFO and come into the 3rd part strong with it, then phase the keys back in to finish, thats just me though I think its a great song nonetheless
hey if you wouldn't mind checking out my latest song and telling me what you think that would be sweet! its actually a song I made in 2011 and I'm trying to bring it back to life lol