Barrellaj's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[My Punk Rock Girl]

I give this a 2.5 because I feel as if it needs to be more full. I love that you took time to write lyrics but some things I would change- I would change the voice filter. something about sounding THAT robotic doesn't really seem romantic. also I would layer effects over the percussion. it sounds too.... basic? add some reverb, add some distortion, just somethingf to make it pop. I gave you a 4 up top. I don't want to ruin your score because this isn't bad, I would just change things ;)

hanorotu responds:

I will definitely take this into consideration. I might remake the song after I get finished with a few projects. I agree it does sound a little empty. I thought maybe I would try minimalistic, but I guess it didn't really work for this song xD

[Bass is Kickin' Remake!!!]

this is awesome, it reminds me of the stuff I like to make. I would just say make it longer and add a bridge. also that synth idk what it is, either a glass bell or something, I would totally get rid of it and add something else. just hop on 3xosc get the crs matched up and just tweak it until you get a nice hypersaw or something. also it seems you used a saw for the bass? it doesn't sound bad, it would just sound a lot better if it was pure bass. all in all very good, I like

eyramusic responds:

hmm... maybe i'll try that can't make pure basses i'll try though the main synth is preset it's square 2 on 3xosc (if you have fl) i'll try what you said! :-) thanks for advice!

[Hipster Vs. Square [WIP]]

Amen dude, at first it reminded me of deadmau5. I agree with the comment below, carry out the bass a bit more, or filter it differently and throw in a curve ball every coupe bars. it would sound nasty

SirSirius responds:

wow thanks, deadmau5 :D

[Android Tears]

very nice wip indeed. my advice however is on your percussion. I think it's safe to say you used samples for the bass and melo, the beauty of samples is that they are already effected. go in and reverb your snare, get a nice loud echo in it, maybe add some distortion and compress it or something. same with the kick. don't make them too sharp, but loud enough to say THIS IS FUCKING DUBSTEP. lol know what I mean? but I like it a lot so far, good job dude ;)

SirSirius responds:

thanks :) yeah those drums are just there to give it a little rythm, the sounds of it still suck :/
but hey I didn't use samples... it's a vst...

[Shockophile]

I like

I would kill for this flp, I have so many ideas hahaha.. good work duder

Treysen responds:

Lol well honestly I don't even have this FLP anymore... Lost it when I updated to FLSV10 xD... Thanks for the rating! :D

[Bounce (Final) (Mr Jay)]

nice production

I'm sketchy on house, I listen to some but producing it can be hard. what I can say for sure you definitely want a new bass, and change up the percussion. in fact go back and devote a bunch of time to just th epercussion, make it a bit off time and add some toms or something. also house is best at about 128 bpm. slow it down and when you're doing percussion listen to just the kick and bass along with the metronome. from there make it just off time enough to be able to dance multiple steps too. not that you know how to dance but you should feel the groove going in several directions. I like it though. you should start effecting the synths too, some reverb and some timing delays would deifnitely make it sound like a whole new song
8/10 5/5

MisterJayElectro responds:

THIS is the kind of review I love. The kind that can tell me almost professionally what I'm doing wrong, and ways to fix it. Thanks! If I can find the .flp, I'll see what I can do with this!

[Swimming In The Clouds (MrJay)]

swimming :)

I totally get the title man lol. and if it wasn't for that I wouldn't like it as much, good song man, I'm going to listren to your other's now

MisterJayElectro responds:

Thanks! Yeah, it actually took me a while to think of a good name.

[Just the Right, Wrong Note]

good shit

love it dude, 2 5s already :P

NJ732NoRespect responds:

thanks buddy i dig your new track we gotta do something better then mikody come to my house today so we can do somthing i made a synth we can use on ts404

[Roykmaskin]

totally cool

reminds me of osme of the stuff I've made, just your note and pattern choice lol

anyway it's real catchy and fits really well, very versatile and changes a lot

5/5
10/10

mind reviewing me? just uploaded what I like to think is a nice track a little while ago

Binaerpilot responds:

Yea, I notice that a lot of Binärpilot's work has 2 or so main ideas with variations and stuff.

[[MR] - Glass Corridor]

horrorfyingly ambient

judging y the other song I reviewed and this one I can say you have a very broad/ interesting outlook on techno

I enjoy how diverse each of your songs are, and how wide your range of music must be, you incorporate alot of elements that many would find difficult to incorporate

keep up the good work dude, I'll keep checking in for new stuff, that is if you're still producing?

MattReeves responds:

Wow, thank you so much! Of course! The two most recent songs are on an album that should be finished within a month. I'll have a page where all my stuff can be downloaded once it's finished. Be sure to look out for that!